How Twitter Finally Taught Me to be an Editor
I’ve been an editor for 20-plus years. But Twitter—that idiot desktop companion for the work-averse—has become my mid-career editing coach.
This may be due to how I use Twitter, at least some of the time: Less for top-of-brain me-spatter and more for tiny reports or editorials.
Fact is, it’s tough to convey any substance in 140 characters. You have to carefully weigh every word, letter and space. Even punctuation.
Here’s an example. I wanted to share a delicious, fantastically gross item of neighborhood gossip. But it’s not for this blog. So I Tweeted:
House that was site of mass murder 30 years ago–and where following owners’ dead body sat for 4 weeks in Dec–for sale in my ‘hood! Cheap!
Or this (unattractive) detour into moralizing. I Tweeted this after I observed the right-wingnuts’ tasteless glee at Kennedy’s brain tumor news:
The hate for Kennedy online right now is horrific. USAToday comment ref’d Kopeckne family. People can be so small. *That’s* the tragedy.
Okay, the prose is cramped, the comments elliptical. But writing substantial Tweets teaches a key journalism skill: Make every word count.
If I were teaching journalism (the academy shudders), I’d have students edit 500-word stories as Tweets. Not for the result, but the process.
I’ve edited miles of copy in my day. Nonetheless, I find that every time I sit down to write a meaningful Tweet I hone my craft a bit more.
Thinking about all this today, I decided to try a music review. It’s labored, I know. But I had my (brief) say about a song that moved me.
Nominate Tom Waits for Pulitzer: “Road to Peace” is growly, pounding, horrific news report on Mideast bloodwars. Quotes Henry Kissinger (!)
Yes, I may have lost it entirely. I’m writing in 140 word chunks and just nominated a musician for a Pulitzer. Go ahead. Tweet about it.
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p.s. Every paragraph in this item is 140 characters or fewer. Whether it’s admirably tight, barely coherent or pointless, I leave to others.
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27, May, 2008 at 3:05 pm
Excellent post, and I like the paragraph structure here. @ Everyone, you can follow Craig’s honed tweets here: http://twitter.com/craigstoltz
27, May, 2008 at 3:38 pm
Yep, I now think in near-perfect 140-character bursts. And I just bought the Tom Waits song, too!
27, May, 2008 at 10:21 pm
Awesome post. I am a big fan of twitter because it takes the ah and umms out.
27, May, 2008 at 11:15 pm
Hi Craig,
It was great to meet you this evening at the Capital Cabal event. This article on Twitter helping hone diting skill is so much on the mark.
Shashi
27, May, 2008 at 11:23 pm
we use SMS text extensively for communication. and they say that because of the limit ( 156 letters I think), it made everybody’s english spelling bad….
Your become UR.
later becomes l8r., etc.
It can go many ways!
29, May, 2008 at 7:25 am
Just think of Tweets as novels for the Attention Crash Age.
29, May, 2008 at 12:14 pm
Cool. Even before Twitter I started having my advanced editing students do a 150-character summary of every story. Rationale: I ‘d seen a “fill in the box to send an SMS” as part of a newspaper’s online CMS. It was on the same screen as the regular (shovelwre) dump text box, and while the paper — and many others — still aren’t using it, I figured if it is there, eventually it will become someone’s responsiblity, probably the desk’s.
I’d really like to have reporters do it, because in the process it also gets them focused on the story and produces a pretty decent summary or refer line for the Web. Alas, I don’t teach the reporting/writing end of the class, only the editing.
29, May, 2008 at 3:42 pm
This is great. I used twitter for a while, left it and returned. I’m starting to integrate it into my newsroom and my journalism teachings.
30, May, 2008 at 6:16 pm
How revolutionary!
Wriiting news in broadcast style!
OMG! Print journalism professor discovers brevity! Film at 11!
31, May, 2008 at 10:23 am
I am a former newspaper writing coach and find myself, like you, weighing every word when writing a tweet.
Twitter is a great tool to teach editing skills. But I fear that the LOL, OMG and IMHO abbreviations, and others like it, will slip into regularly writing as a result. It already has among teens who are even using them in school essays and other writing assignments.
31, May, 2008 at 1:10 pm
This reminds me of an English professor I knew who had his students write a news story at 1,000 words, then as a brief, then as a photo caption. That professor? One Craig Q. Stoltz. He wasn’t MY professor, but he described it to me. Brilliant. Craig, you invented Twitter! I invented MTV but damn if I get any royalties.
31, May, 2008 at 4:46 pm
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1, June, 2008 at 7:26 am
Seems like you only publish positive comments, but just in case you don’t, I’d like to say, with all due respect, that this post makes no sense to me.
I simply can’t agree that the purpose of good editing should be to make “every word count” Are you saying that good writing results from forcing yourself to express your ideas in the shortest possible way? That seems silly to me. There are dozens of forms of communication in the world, each one good at expressing ideas in different situations. So the moment you judge the quality of writing by how efficient and brief it is, it will lose one of its main advantages over many other, more efficient methods like pictures or videos.
And what is the eventual outcome if we as editors encourage a society which sees writing as nothing more than a means of quickly and efficiency disseminating information? In the short term, we may sell more newspapers, magazines and blogs ads, but we’ll never compete with multimedia, and in the big picture, we may be perpetuating the very system which will be our demise. Just a thought
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4, June, 2008 at 11:52 am
Thanks, Stuart. You’re right: there are cases where richer prose is effective, even essential. They just need to be selected carefully.
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